rebirth of true love

this is a poem of a girl who loses her faith,belief...and finds herself broken...and how miraculously there is a rebirth of a love..a love as never before...this poem is sure to melt hearts across...

My heart was bleeding

i gave all of it to him

and he relished my tears

i cried because that gave him happiness

i loved him....he destroyed me.

i waited for the day..

the day he will yearn for me...

my love held the belief...

the belief that withstood the

unsurmountable pain he unleashed

i had done what i had feared the most

given my heart to the wrong person..

he got his pleasures from me..

and left me broken and weak..

i cried...it was unheard..

the promises he made..

i could hear them all along..

the faith he demanded..

which i wholeheartedly offered..

was in pieces...

faith and belief were mere words now...

love was a pain that destroyed me..

he was done with me...

my tears and pleadings pested him...

he dusted me off...

i was alone...i was pained...i was helpless..

and on the shores of the ocean...

as i contemplated...

for days and for months...

my heart knew it deserved better..

with every passing day..

with every sunrise and sunset...

i knew the right one was yet to come...

i was lost then in a land of

heartless animals who killed love faith and belief...

detached i was to the world around

little did i know,

that there was a smile 

that was healing me everyday..

that was pained by my grief

eyes that so deeply loved me..

a heart that was set to cure me..

from this befallen illness in me..

magical,yes it was..

world looked lovelier than ever before..

my pain felt healed by his love..

he was there for me...all day long..

the reason fro my smile..

a support to my life..

all the unheard prayers...

of my heart were answered..

he stood before me..

my perfect angel..

he held my hands

and together we tore apart 

the strands of pain

my happiness was my beauty..

he made me beautiful..

i felt as though i was the center of the universe..

every moment..every second..

i felt elated...i felt grateful..

the pain i felt was beautiful..

because...if it were not for it..

i would have never realised 

how special he was to me..

he was my baby i could play with,

he was a brother who protected me..

he was my buddy i could cry to..

he was my lover i

could love...

love like never befoore..

love like unconditional..

love like living it..

love like he belonged to me..'

love like my heart pours itself out..

he lived my happiness

i lived his love..

he was all i wanted..

my heart was secure in his hands...

my life sprang in joy..

everybody seemed him..

the world seemed us...'

and the eternal joy 

forever remained in

the heavenly realms of our existence

my angel....

Author's Note

friends...this poem wasn't written...it flowed from my heart...
waiting for your comments and remarks..'

Reviews

[Nikki Hughes]

It is beautiful. I think the way you drew out your feelings shows how passionate your were when you wrote it.

[nivedha]

thank you so much nikki...i am glad u liked it...

[Anand Sehgal]

good emotive write. very good spontaneity. but make it a little concise :)

keep up the good work !
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[nivedha]

thank you anand...yes..i will surely work upon makin it more concise