Barrier of Time

All things change

through time this is true.

The old fades away

and is replaced by the new.

Time waits for no man.

And is a healer it’s said.

It’s the invisible force

through which we are led.

Time has no footprints

no face and no voice.

Yet we are bound by it’s rules

without any choice.

The elusive force

that’s demanding and true.

Is the barrier we find

that we cannot brake through.

Reviews

[saunved]

Yeah...its that barrier which no one has been able to break through...I liked the comparisons you made with time a lot.
Just a small suggestion: Try putting" 'tis" instead of "it's" in some places in the poem and observe the effect, for example, instead of:
"It's the invisible force" write " 'Tis the invisible force"
Nice, isn't it? A bit of an "old poem" effect.
Go here for more information: http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ask-teacher/96775-tis-meaning-usage.html
Hope you find it useful.

Great poem!

[Nicola Farren]

Thank you I am glad you liked my work and tis!a uesful comment x

[Mari ana biossat]

Now I am catching on where to post comments :o))....Your writings are very philosophical I like this and yet you keep the rhythm. Good job Mari Ana

[zainul]

Time waits for none.
So,we have to wait for time if we want to take advantage of time.
Great message indeed.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific poem, great rhythm and has deep thoughts that makes reader ponder and agree with them.
Excellent :)