Redemption

He'll come begging for forgiveness  

When the doors shall close 

You are late but you were told  

          

You should have done as you were advised.      

Now that the time has arrived    

And all that's left are regrets                     

Before the sun shall set   

      

And all that will remain           

Are endless echoes                  

in a hollow night     

                          

And men with deadly sins                       

And a fire that shall forever ignite.

Reviews

[AFAQ]

A very solid message by the poet. She writes wonderful poetry, so full of substance. Maturity of thought process is evident from the message contained in these lines.

[nefalnumair]

Thank you so much. Im glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very meaningful. I really liked this.

[nefalnumair]

Thank you. Glad you liked it! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺