sunset

There is a point when good-bye fades

The last breath is exhaled as the world slowly dies away

 

As the sun fades and the curtain is drawn

And colors of sky blue change to crimson red kissing the sky at dawn

 

I struggle for the strength to wave and say

Good-bye to such a beautiful day

as our lives carry on

Reviews

[R.M.C]

A lovely poem. You've captured the sunset really well in a simple but beautiful way. With the warm days I've experienced this last week, I can relate extremely well to not wanting the day to end. Underneath, I detect that the whole thing may be a metaphor for saying goodbye to a relationship... But that just might be me. Good write.

[nocool]

no.. not saying good bye to any relationship.. i am single.
there is a spot where i live...
sunset there is amazing. being a hopeless romantic
and nothing to write for, and having a great day.. and no one to tell..
I figured why not the sun dancing off the water.
I wanted to capture the moment ..
and what it was to me.
;)
thanks for the review. Saying good-bye always sucks, but sometimes when one door closes
another opens.. sometimes better.. sometimes not..(shrugs)

I have learned that if you have a one time chance for a once in a life time girl..
Hey Jude!!!! Better go and get her HA!

or someone else will...

and if you feel like a dork.. and look like a dork..
at least you have a funny story about it :)

[R.M.C]

You're welcome, and I agree with everything you've said. I wish I had a beautiful sunset to watch :(

[nocool]

if you have a girlfriend you have one every-time she says good-night/good-bye
;)

read moreif you have a girlfriend you have one every-time she says good-night/good-bye
;)

often passion and inspiration is found in the simplicity of the most beautiful moments right!?