I scream for you...

I'm your poison.

You're my drug.

We could never work.

Our love is tainted.

Our love is foul.

I was blinded by our past.

You were blinded by our future.

Too scared to take a risk.

Too scared to take a chance.

Too scared.

Something so confusing could never run it's coarse.

Something so intricate could never be simplified.

Lost in my thoughts...

Lost in your hopes...

desires...

Lost in the words of others...

Words..

filtering our bodies...

morphing a heaven into a hell

Changing our mindsets

Causing me to scream.

Screaming from the fiery pits of hell.

Screaming for help.

Screaming for freedom.

Screaming for you.

But...

you ignored me...

and slowly escaped into the darkness.

Leaving me alone...

screaming for you...

 

Reviews

[Engulfed in Flames]

nice! i like the last stanza.

[deeps]

Screaming from the fiery pits of hell.
Screaming for help.
Screaming for freedom.
Screaming for you.
But...
you ignored me...
and slowly escaped into the darkness.
Leaving me alone...
screaming for you...


Boy, I know these feelings here
I could relate to these words.
This is an emotional write here.
I like it. You wrote this really well.

[Inner Rain]

Its really good. but i suggest you cut it into sections/paragraphs so its easier to read and so it is easier to sense the "melody" of the piece... But other than that... Its Beautiful...

[Shadow Writer]

The pain of love written with the sharp edge of the pen. Good flow and well written. Phantom...........