Winter Haiku

Winter Haiku

A Poem by Nolo Segundo
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The cold desolation of winter sometimes reflects that of the heart.

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Losing her, a dream,
winter ravaged my soul.
The snowman melts.

© 2017 Nolo Segundo



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This haiku speaks a sadness of loss and desolation..a powerful piece for sure..nice work..

Posted 6 Days Ago


The brevity of a piece often tends to be a gravitational pull for me. A beautifully worded haiku!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sadness here but nonetheless a beautiful haiku... and indeed, the snowman melts. Sighhh.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nolo Segundo

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Emmajoy-- my salvation was when my snowman finally did melt....
emmajoy

4 Months Ago

One has only to wait til the light lengthens..
Very few words but expresses many emotions. I iked this haiku a lot as it perfectly captures the emotion of losing someone.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nolo Segundo

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Najam-- but the loss spurred me on to a great gain eventually, the way life often evens o.. read more
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I agree with you. You are most welcome.

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Nolo Segundo
Nolo Segundo

Philadelphia, PA



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From adolescence until I was 24, I was an agnostic. Then I almost drowned, and had what has come to be called a near death experience. So for the past 45 years I've known that the problem with life i.. more..

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