Razor

anouther one of my weird dark poems

You realize

As your blood drains out of you

That this is the end

No more of this

As your bloody razor falls to the floor

Your body grows weak

As the minutes tick by

You feel nothing

just bliss

As your blood runs down the drain

As your life comes to a close

You scream out

wishing someone will hear you

But you know

No one will

Your alone in this cold world

Always have been

But only for a short time

Cut shorter by a razor blades kiss

Knowing that somebody loved you

Just didnt save you in time

Time has run out for you

Your body falls to the floor

Dead

 

Reviews

[Lynx]

Wow this one is really poetic, and written in a very beautiful manner. The words chosen were beautiful, powerful and with strong meaning, giving and showing a lot of emotion. Great job, but it seems like all your poems are exactly the same. Try touching on different views on this,

Lingga

[Kaelani]

aww courtney this is really good i hope u feel better

[Kaelani]

wow this is deep but a really good poem! love yas

[chris]

dont worry courtney, life will be better

Depressing... just checking up on you... I liked it full of feelings...

[Courtney]

yup i always feel alone in a crowd of people...

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I can also relate
still feel alone even in the midst of others
I hope you are doing better, here for you if you ever need me

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

this is a very dark, yet deep piece. I used to be a cutter myself, so I can relate.


Great Write.

[Kitty]

And another great write. My favourite lines:
"You scream out
wishing someone will hear you
But you know
No one will"

I relate to this. It's the story of my life it seems...

Great job!!!!!

Josie