Wicked Veins

Wicked Veins

A Poem by Daydreamer
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Something I wrote randomly in 4 minutes.

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These wicked veins were

getting too narrow

from my bitter state

enclosed in a body

that'd do nothing

but feel all wrenched

and a heart that shrouded

in blackness (in vain)from

the grudges it has built in  

I didn't want my life to revolve

around the same small circle...

so I woke up one morning when

the only pulse I believed would

make me feel alive;

was finally on my way

the only way to collapse

the lumps in these veins;

the only real breakthrough,

was choosing to forgive



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2014 Daydreamer



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Hi Manal. Reading your poem reminded me of my early twenties days when I was seeing a therapist. She told me that the person I hurt most with my refusal or inability to forgive was myself. I did not believe her for some time. But I have felt those effects that you speak of and I am still learning to let go and heal. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

You have no idea how much this warmed my heart!
Thank YOU for stopping by and leaving such a.. read more
Michelle Coleman

1 Year Ago

You are welcome 😊



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Hi Manal. Reading your poem reminded me of my early twenties days when I was seeing a therapist. She told me that the person I hurt most with my refusal or inability to forgive was myself. I did not believe her for some time. But I have felt those effects that you speak of and I am still learning to let go and heal. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

You have no idea how much this warmed my heart!
Thank YOU for stopping by and leaving such a.. read more
Michelle Coleman

1 Year Ago

You are welcome 😊
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Gee
Not bad for a 4 minute write.Good job

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Yep I know it's not any bad!
Thanks for reading 😎
I'm impressed that you wrote something as nice as this in just four minutes. That's always a clear sign that you posess talent as writer. I absolutely love this poem! Good job! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Thankyouuuu so much! Appreciated whole-heartedly!
We must forgive to move on. We forgive perhaps more for our own sakes than for the forgiven. Because, when we hold onto grudges, when we refuse to forgive, we empower the person who hurt us to keeping hurting us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

That's what I said........
Thank you for the read 😁
MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

You're welcome.
So true, forgive and forget. Love this poem. :))

Kaze~

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Thankyouu :)
Blackstar

2 Years Ago

Anytime. :-))
Wow! I love the emotion you put into it:) Also thank sfor accepting my friend request:)

- Cool Girl (ultimate fan of your work)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Wow! That's really cool of you,cool girl 😝😝
thank you sooo muchh💜💜
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

You are so totally welcome:)
True...forget and forgive. For the pain to stop one should let go off all the grudges. A poem with the touch of bitter reality. Good work my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Very,very few people embrace the true attribute of forgiveness, so I decided I must share my take on.. read more
Aayushi

2 Years Ago

We should forgive not for the other person's sake but for our peace of mind.
Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Sureellyy💕💕💕
Thank you for your kind review and comments
you left on my page and this piece.


I loved this stanza's line my favorite.


the only real breakthrough,

was choosing to forgive


Blessings. Kindred Poet



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

3 Years Ago

Haha, I see, it was my favorite too! Thank you back,dear...
Stay all blessed x😍
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

It's a pleasure my friend. you're very welcome. Blessings. Kindred Poet

wonderful images realized with depth and clarity. Well done!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

3 Years Ago

Oh wow! Thank you so much!!♥♥
Nicely done view and very thoughtful! I loved the ending!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Daydreamer

3 Years Ago

People should forgive each other more, I think♥
Thank you so much for your visit!💘😇

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