Rhyme of Time

Please read the author's note. Thanks.

It's all stale now and,
This emptiness just feels so familiar..

 

Take me to the place back then ..

 

Before we've got  too wrapped into this tornado of "what's going on and how it'd rather be"

 

Guess we're sunk in broken syllables of yesterday....

 

Take me back in time when-

 

Everything was a reason to be amused
Our skin nearly hypnotized at the thought of being alive

 

We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time

 

I'm not here tryin' to romantacise history but,
 we've got to wake up
And see that our past,present and future are all sonants to the same rhyme;

Endless spirals of everything we've lived,felt, loved and lost

 

Now, our cerebrums are just so fused..
from our bewitched remembrance

Where we'd only dwell on every turn,
every lesson we've learned

and kill everything else we never recalled

 

So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born

 

Author's Note

Too often, people embrace the past in weird ways. They kinda filter the past; thinking of either memories or lessons learned ONLY, and make judgements on the quality of their life based on that. They make the past 'empty' through their method of remembrance. They totally forget all of the supreme moments (good or bad) that could give an absolute meaning to their quest of life.The past,present and future are all connected and one cannot exist without the other. One should live in loving memory of all three in order to lead a life with passion.
P.S- This is just my personal opinion 100% :), all discussions allowed :)

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful thoughts.........

"We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream

Simply ardent souls cluelessly wandering in time"

"So let's hold on to the cadence to which our senses respond

'Cause in every waking moment, a meaning is born"

amazing poem!!!
i liked it!!!
:)

[Daydreamer]

Pushkaaaar, many thanks to youu🌹

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WooooW!!! you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Miss Sharon]

Wow....shat wisdom from one so young! This is an amazing and deeply touching write my dear. Love this line (sunk in broken syllables of yesterday....) You are an amazing talent. ~Sharon

[Emily]

A very lovely poem!
Congrats on your award!
Keep it up!

[Daydreamer]

Hey there!☺
Thanks much, appreciate it!💙

[nazia]

A very well explained work and a profound message.:)
Your note is so true Manal. But personally I feel we all do live in all three otherwise life would be hell. Each moment passing by is a defining moment which nurtures us some way or the other. Extremely wise piece :)

[Daydreamer]

Thank you, I appreciate your precious words💎

[The StoryTeller]

I totally agree man! Maybe it's just the song Gold by Imagine Dragons that I'm listening to right now talking, but we must look back on all three positivly! Besides, we can learn amazing things! O my God I am feeling amazing right now!

[Saddam]

Selective piece, This is very wisdom write..................

[Daydreamer]

Thanks a lot,SSADD😁

[Cool Girl]

Hii!! I feel like we havnt talked in a while xD

I like this piece very much. Your opinion is beautiful:) thank you for sharing!

[Daydreamer]

Oh helloooo xD
Thanks a lot 🌹🌹🌹

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!! :)

[Rana]

Your ideas never seem to fail to cause the eyes to go wide and to set a train of thoughts in motion. Eternally amazing. Um, when i think of it, i tend to filter my past while remembering it too. We tend to remember mostly only what succeeds in making a deep impression on our minds, or only such things which arose intense feelings. Certain things fade away from memory in time. Or maybe they just sit in a dark corner, waiting to be remembered again. Is'nt the theme of this poem so wonderful. Totally meaningful and refreshing and witty and enjoyable. Well it somehow reminded me of this quote : "The farther back you can look, the farther forward you are likely to see"-Winston Churchill

[Daydreamer]

Definitely one of the best things ever said to me.
Too happy to express my gratitude to youu Ranoosh😍
Thanks a million🌹
And the quote is wonderful by the way🌠

[Arshia]

Hey..that was just so touching!
'Everything was a reason to be amused!'
Its so true that we tend to filter the past, although what makes its truly worth remembering are both the happy and bitter memories!
Very well written and beautifully expressed :)

[Daydreamer]

I knowww right....!
Thank you so much Arshia for this wonderful review♥

[Arshia]

you are most welcome :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

"We were never too lost, too broken or too young to dream."
I love this poem, it is so meaningful and deep. I really like the last line "'Cause in every walking moment, a meaning is born" It's a amazing poem.

[Daydreamer]

Your words mean so much to me, since I fancy this poem over all.
Thank you so much,BD!😊😊😊