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A Poem by Daydreamer
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On the verge of losing my mind.

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I live in an elucidation

in a moiety

in the middle of

a reversible nature

between shadows of

stunned truths where,

nothing and everything exists


© 2015 Daydreamer



Author's Note

Daydreamer
The moiety consists of:
a)Nothing
b)Everything

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Manal: Well that's quite a description: The character lives clearly on one side of the middle, of changes, in mind, in place, in space, is deep, then add onto that "realm" or that "state" ; now trying to understand on the side of the middle in BETWEEN shadows of shocking revelations, where nothing and everything exists. I totally agree with your description of the poem. Wow.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

2 Years Ago

We can talk about it...your philosophy is quite interesting...
Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Thank you so so much, inbox me anytime❤💕
Confuser

2 Years Ago

Manal: You're so sweet; looking at it; OMG, I think it's the first thing that came to my mind. Tho.. read more



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to answer your question : I live in an elucidation
in a moiety
in the middle of
a reversible nature..one of two equal parts : yes?
Impressive write..love reading your work!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Good write Manal Enjoyed your lines of thought

Posted 2 Years Ago


Small with big presentation.
Love this expression friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Many thanks to you :)
The last line gave the whole thing beauty. This is really meaningful, so much so that it has more than one meaningful meaning. Nothing and Everything can be like the two sides of a coin when you flip it for a toss. Nothing and Everything can also be seen as a simile for a passionate life where things either mean everything to a person or nothing, there isn't anything in between. Either get whole-heartedly into it or don't have anything to do with it. This is a lovely little piece of work, Manal!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Awww.. THANK YOU🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷 thank you so much Rana😍😍😍😍💞.. read more
A small thought provoking write..good one Manal..:))

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Good to see you Anne! Thank you dear💞
Manal: Well that's quite a description: The character lives clearly on one side of the middle, of changes, in mind, in place, in space, is deep, then add onto that "realm" or that "state" ; now trying to understand on the side of the middle in BETWEEN shadows of shocking revelations, where nothing and everything exists. I totally agree with your description of the poem. Wow.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

2 Years Ago

We can talk about it...your philosophy is quite interesting...
Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Thank you so so much, inbox me anytime❤💕
Confuser

2 Years Ago

Manal: You're so sweet; looking at it; OMG, I think it's the first thing that came to my mind. Tho.. read more
Brief yet very effective writing and thought-provoking. Inspired! I like this one a LOT.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

so many thank you's will never be enough😱 massive thanks for your constant encouragement, support.. read more
Jennie Baron

2 Years Ago

You're welcome, and you're very kind. But this was my pleasure to read. Such expert use of vocabul.. read more
Daydreamer

1 Year Ago

Arrghhhh😍😍😍😍
in the middle of

a reversible nature

I can spend hours pondering in upon these two lines alone, great job

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Wooaaahh!! Flatteration at its best👌🏻😍 thank you so much for this humbleness Latifa🌹
Liked this little pondering of yours. We all wonder the same things at times.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Thank you💞 exactly... But it stroke me so hard the time I wrote this! I was literally in awe thou.. read more
Ha - great - well worthy of ponder time afterwards - yes yes yes we reside in the everywhen - very well articulated XX

Posted 2 Years Ago


Daydreamer

2 Years Ago

Aw.... So glad you liked it ... Your comments are boisterous😍❤️💞

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Well, I live in an elucidation,in a moiety, in the middle of a reversible nature, between shadows of stunned truths, where nothing and everything exists. #18 years old "Female"👧 #Art lover .. more..

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