Making a memory

Can you please shut the door...

and I'll close the window...

As, my eyes are staring at you...

and you are looking at mine..

just hold my hand...

boy! your touch is so sensual..

touch my lips with yours...

As I'm ready to kiss you boy...

In this room....there is no one else.

except you and me...

and thats the trick....

of Making a memory...

Reviews

[Together]

And that is the trick of making a memory - Very sensual!

[Roxy]

This is so sensual and beautiful!

[Innocent]

So sensual!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Sweet cute and lovely :)

[kurrupted]

plain but splendid, short and wow!...thumbs up

[D. L. Hutson]

Memories can be so beautiful. I like this it is very sweet.

[intangible_soul]

Very lovely writing. I really liked the ending.

[Brenda Sue]

Very cute. Great job.

[Choosing Life]

I love this...

Wow, short , sweet, cute and fitting fo rthis heart's day.

I am adding this to my library...

[Kara Emily Krantz]

very cute - i like how "thats the trick / to making a memory." and of course this brought up the song in my head, bon jovis, which is such an amazing song.

nice job :)