I Am Empty

I Am Empty

A Poem by mae23

I am made of glass.

Easy to see through, easy to Break.


I am supposed to be full.

My purpose is forgotten, my purpose is Unfulfilled.


There is nothing within me.

I am filled with air, I am filled with Emptiness.



© 2017 mae23



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Short and simple but totally relatable. There comes those times when you feel like you're lost, like you're not exactly unhappy, but it's​ as if nothing matters at the moment. You managed to describe it in few creative words.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I think many people feel this way much of the time, but we go on hiding this fragility under whatever cover we are inclined to display. Good imagery with a sense of determination & resignation (strange contrast, but very realistic).

Posted 1 Month Ago


You stimulate some serious thought with your brevity. Good going!

Take care -Dave

Posted 2 Months Ago


Love this poem. It hit home for me

Posted 2 Months Ago


mae23

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the review.
It's beautiful so much to take in and so much said in very few words

Posted 2 Months Ago


Nice one. Less words but meaningful.
...
"What can I do for you that is fine
To help you get out from emptiness
Should I pour you some dazzling wine
To bring you a glass of happiness "

Posted 3 Months Ago


jazzymars

3 Months Ago

No Mae, I just construct it to answer your poem.. I just love answering poems or sometimes making th.. read more
mae23

3 Months Ago

Yes its very nice!
jazzymars

3 Months Ago

Then, Thank you... And By the way, which flavor to prefer? :D

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