Jillian

Jillian

A Poem by Glen's not so clean slate
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No words really. . . Just fantasisingg of the day I rode ye to completion in the forest.

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I keep dreaming of ye
How I take ye in the morn
How I ride ye so
So rough
Yet sometimes so tenderly
With the lord Jesus Christ as my captain
Ye guide me
Ye take me to new places
To brand new and exciting heights
As we ride up and down that mountain so
Together
In motion
All over the dusty roads
Through the thick red bush
And then ploughed ye through the mud
Twas not an easy completion
But I must say
Once the ride was done
I felt like we were as one
I think I shall name ye Jill
My brand new bicycle
That I shall ride forever
With all of me God mighty will

© 2017 Glen's not so clean slate



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Quite crafty of ya, Glen, to tug us in two different directions; it is one heck of a ride -- either way … wink*

Nicely worded and presented, I thank you most kindly for the creative share. ⁓ Richard : )


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I used to ride a bike, but now - too old!
Thank you I enjoyed your poem.


Posted 2 Months Ago


I have had many a good ride.
Given loving care,
while we traveled through the miles.
Sadly,
someone stole you,
and I doubt they had the same respect as me.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Great, very clever! Love the double entendre?! You are a rake sir! Very lyrically, flowingly, rhythmically done. I am so happy for both of you -a match made in heaven! :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


I enjoyed this poem. Positive journey and perfect ending. Hopeful and good words and thoughts shared. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


Very clever I like it a lot

Posted 4 Months Ago


This was great! It let believe I was reading a poem from centuries ago. Self-assured and great word usage. Great work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen's not so clean slate

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review
You got me.. lol...... I have to say I smiled when I read the "with the Lord Jesus Christ as my captain" ...that was good..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen's not so clean slate

4 Months Ago

Thanking Ye lass
Hi friends, would dearly love some feedback on my latest work. Bit of a silly one but oh well

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Added on September 5, 2017
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Tags: Bikes, adventure, riding, comedy

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Glen's not so clean slate
Glen's not so clean slate

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I am a poet and I don't wipe. I tend to write it as it first comes to me in a stream of consciousness fashion and make little edits. Accept it or do not. I am just here to WRITE. Feel free to leave a .. more..

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