Randomly organized Chaos: ROC

Randomly organized Chaos: ROC

A Poem by Anas
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Random Revolving Thoughts of a young mind

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breaking the chains

This is a chance for change

to break outta my cage

this would outrange your rage

we should rearrange

flip over the page

start over all over again

sustain agony 

that's killing me 

beneath the surface

wandering around circuits

wondering who's running the circus

I'm running to the furthest

screaming my life out

this is absurdest

no doubt

I'm foundering the test

but haven't reached the bottom yet

got bailed of my prison

for a ticket to heaven

this is a hell living

you get what you're giving

you bet with what you're given

fail isn't an option, it's a destiny

while agony's killing me...

I'm standing still, but I'm spinning

Al9300dish 03-08-2010 15:48 I fly Waxlessly Winglessly

© 2010 Anas


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You certainly know how to get out what it is you want, when you want it. Great read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! Excellent job! (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really good. You express all the emotions wonderfully and quickly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What I derived from it is to keep on, no matter the setbacks, no matter the hell we must go through. This has a pretty good rhyme scheme to it as well. Very nice. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wrote something like this...I like this though it's really good...And tells someone how to break from a situation...So nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. great poem. unique . and powerful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Anas
Anas

Muslim, Libya



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