Randomly organized Chaos: ROC
A Poem by
Anas
Random Revolving Thoughts of a young mind
breaking the chains This is a chance for change to break outta my cage this would outrange your rage we should rearrange flip over the page start over all over again sustain agony that's killing me beneath the surface wandering around circuits wondering who's running the circus I'm running to the furthest screaming my life out this is absurdest no doubt I'm foundering the test but haven't reached the bottom yet got bailed of my prison for a ticket to heaven this is a hell living you get what you're giving you bet with what you're given fail isn't an option, it's a destiny while agony's killing me... I'm standing still, but I'm spinning Al9300dish 03-08-2010 15:48 I fly Waxlessly Winglessly
© 2010 Anas
Reviews
You certainly know how to get out what it is you want, when you want it. Great read!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this! Excellent job! (:
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this! Excellent job! (:
This was really good. You express all the emotions wonderfully and quickly.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was really good. You express all the emotions wonderfully and quickly.
What I derived from it is to keep on, no matter the setbacks, no matter the hell we must go through. This has a pretty good rhyme scheme to it as well. Very nice. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
What I derived from it is to keep on, no matter the setbacks, no matter the hell we must go through. This has a pretty good rhyme scheme to it as well. Very nice. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I wrote something like this...I like this though it's really good...And tells someone how to break from a situation...So nice job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I wrote something like this...I like this though it's really good...And tells someone how to break from a situation...So nice job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow. great poem. unique . and powerful
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow. great poem. unique . and powerful
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 4, 2010
Last Updated on August 4, 2010
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Anas Muslim, Libya
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1st of all sorry read requests I'm busy with college and everything, I'll come to you all I SWEAR!
2nd of all Sorry I Don't Write About Me's!
That's enough info about my madness....
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