PS I Fly

PS I Fly

A Poem by Anas
"

I don't know, how about: "I don't know"?

"
Color it All Blue 
It's Still a Penny though
Who Wins? That's any-who, right?
Paint the penny Bold White
It'd stay a Black Hole though 
Too Cold and evil

But Call it even
Glow's Glistening in the Horizon
it's the star of the morning 

it's where the secret lies in
Maybe someday you'd get it and stop mourning

Lie down and Stare close-up 
When sun rises up 

and enlightens your blurry vision

Make running tears run out 
no more worries

Cut out the indecision no doubts
make the pain burried
"like Icarus I got wings of mine

Not of Wax though

So I fly highly above 

and forget everything in mind

I Can approach sun if I want to Psych it up

Imma sure like a sword I won't fell to my death too

'Cause he was with Wax

which is something Carl lacks

Sounds absurd, Maybe True

but my Words are TRUE :)"

© 2010 Anas


Author's Note

Anas
Penny's worth a penny, whatever happens!

Black hole is still a black hole!

Fly = fricking love you/ besides meaning flying!

Carl's one of my names :P

Icarus is a character from the greek mythology, his father made him Wings from "wax" so he could fly, but he ignored instructions not to "fly" too close to the sun, and fell to his death..... So WAXLESSLY FLY ;)
Waxlessly means I'm sincere, google it "without wax" idiom...

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i really like the way you write! its so interesting and i love the language you use.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The more times I read this, the more I enjoy it. The words are very powerful and evoke a lot of emotion, and yet there is much room for interpretation as to which emotions they are and what the piece means. Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Nicely put together! I really like the Icarus reference--had forgotten the wings were wax! A great message in this one.."someday you'll get it and stop mourning..." Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! SO CUTE! and haha p.s. I fly! LOVE IT! THE whole Idea!

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