Valentines (Learning to Hate The Color Pink)

A break-up song. My first time working with the theme of love.

Down the sidewalk through the park

We’re alone and it’s after dark

You want to talk but I prefer

To keep everything all bottled up

 

And we just go nuts on Valentines

That’s when everything goes to hell

We just go nuts on Valentines

But after today we’ll be together again

 

And today on this special day

We decided to just part our ways

I know it’s hard, but it’s all been

A big fat flaming chore for me

 

And we just go nuts on Valentines

That’s when everything goes to hell

We just go nuts on Valentines

But after today we’ll be together again

Reviews

[Drako]

nice. a very different view of this so called holiday that everyone else enjoys so much

[Cassiopia Summers]

This piec has good flow. It just rolls right along. Fantastic.

[Ashley]

a very good flow and clear feeling. well done

[TheOther]

I agree with Sammie Raine, this could be a nice song. Good job.

[FocusedAmnesia]

I like it. It reads like a song; nice flow to it.