Soulful Dawn

Fingers of sunrays through my hair

smile of brightness into my eye

 

whispers of good mornings

fragrance of promises

through coffee lips

listening quietly

gossamer

touches

love.

Reviews

[Kristallo]

The ascent of dawn is sublime, and your description of it here, alight with visual sensuality, pays a fitting homage to it. "Fragrance of promises, through coffee lips." This made me smile, and think of morning kisses over fresh coffee at a time when everything made sense... adored the way you worded this. "Gossamer touches love" would have also made a lovely title. You have a sweet and refreshing way with words, this one especially shines with soulful delicacy, immaculate in simplicity.... very well done.

[Souladareatease]

Indeed coffee kisses:) it tis a favourite subject and beloved thing...such as a smell of fresh baked bread...certain things are instant heart-warmers in life.
Thank You...I am working on more of these type of writes, just to sharpen a little and expand in some ways...to make myself be more direct and focused...lol...we'll see about that say I the scatterbrain:)

[Zahra]

beautifully crafted, loved the way it flows. Like sun going down. Very nice

[Souladareatease]

Thank You for such Kind words Voice-much appreciated:)

[Zahra]

you're welcome!

[Lily Finch]

Waoooooooo.....beautifully expressed .....

[Souladareatease]

Awwww thank You Lily:)-appreciated!!!