As I Remember, As You Forget

Every night I will think of you.
Stare at the dark abyss 
You created
All the pain
I miss you and
Every word you said
Everything you did
All reasons
All excuses
All lies
All hopes
All emotions
Everthing I did
Every word I said
You don't miss me or
All the pain
I tried to erase
The dark abyss staring at you
Every night you forget about me

Author's Note

Read this one slowly.

Reviews

[TLK]

This emotional mirror poem is very effective. I realised that there was a mirroring going on before I saw your author's note (of course, I might be lying to make myself look more awesome, but I'm not. I don't need to try to look awesome anyway because my mom thinks I'm cool).

One possible change: your mirror for "You created " is "I tried to erase". "I tried to destroy" would be even more oppositional.

One typo: "everthing".