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[Poeticpiers]

Terse verse at its best

[Angelic Darkness]

Simple words with power....

[closed]

an artistic piece. I like it, especially the twist of sorts at the close.

[Fantasyfairy]

The last line of this is very haunting. It's a short and dark poem, but there is a hint of hope in that last line, or is it despair? i can't make up my mind on that one. Perhaps because of the line before, I would say more hope than despair. Lovely writing. XX

[Bluet_Belle]

Short and sweet. I like the second line.