Unspoken words

Unspoken words

A Poem by Brigg Aries

Hiding behind these smiles
are hurts to the fact I can't deny
Falling for you oh girl I knew
is not in time for me to do

Oh girl if you only knew
how easy it is to fall for you
That every moment I hope and pray
you'll feel the same for me someday

Many times I tried to unfold
for hearts are broken due to words untold
but every time before the words be said
that friendship we had cuts the road ahead

Friendship I am afraid to lose
that for at once I had to choose
Keep inside what for you I feel
or let the truth just be revealed

Whatever may even happen
truth be revealed or just be hidden
In my eyes you'll always see
that you're the best part of me.

© 2017 Brigg Aries



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Sounds like lyrical to me, kabayan. I like the rhythm of this poetry.
There is fear inside you that is blocking the chance to speak your heart. But I understand, in some cases friendship takes the risk when one tries to tell the true feelings. Anyway, remember that the truth will set you free...
Good job for this piece, kabayan!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brigg Aries

2 Months Ago

John 8:32 thanks kabayan. a very good reminder to me



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If you love a girl, its better to tell her rather than bursting ourselves inside. You wont lose your friendship.

However as a poem you well expressed a romantic dilemma well. Good poem!


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


What if she feels the same way? What if she's longing to say these exact words to you too? Imagine the excitement about that.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sounds like lyrical to me, kabayan. I like the rhythm of this poetry.
There is fear inside you that is blocking the chance to speak your heart. But I understand, in some cases friendship takes the risk when one tries to tell the true feelings. Anyway, remember that the truth will set you free...
Good job for this piece, kabayan!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brigg Aries

2 Months Ago

John 8:32 thanks kabayan. a very good reminder to me
Yes - it is sometimes very difficult to not let the one we love know exactly how we feel. To risk a true friendship, ah, there is the rub. Think though, how much more might be gained if your feelings are returned.

Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave

2 Months Ago

Of course it's hard! That is what you were lamenting in your poem. Do you really think your friend.. read more
Brigg Aries

2 Months Ago

i dont know really. but most likely yes.
Dave

2 Months Ago

If that is the case then I'mm truly sorry for you. Love, like much of life always has a certain ele.. read more
If you went a less sappy direction this would be pretty outstanding. It's good writing either way I think.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brigg Aries

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