I Know What

I Know What

A Poem by Brie
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Just a clarification, I guess.

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I am no longer in pain,
but I know what pain is. 
I am no longer in love,
but I know what love is. 
I am no longer in my days of fair health,
but I know what health is. 
I am no longer in rapture,
yet, I know what rapture is. 

I don't quite understand why I have become so numb, or why I give my all to the people who give nothing in return. I must sound so greedy, so selfish, and so vague, but I have these feelings and accusations; they're getting in my way. I apologize for the incredibly rude aura I give off, and maybe it's not an aura and I'm actually a terrible person, but I really do try to be the best person I can, despite my unfair knowledge. 

© 2017 Brie



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This sounds like a declaration of depression. Honest painful admission. I assume this was hard to write but I'm glad you were able to share with us

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Please try and complete it. it's incomplete, give it another verse (8 lines). You can do it. i'll be expecting

Posted 11 Months Ago


The collection of words so beautifully combined. You have written a very powerful piece.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is raw, and I admire you so much for that. never stop writing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loathsomely honest.

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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