Last Minute Deal....

Last Minute Deal....

A Poem by Dawn

She felt the heat of the midday sun
on her bikini body.
And had her sunglass on to
protect her eyes from the harmful
rays of this magnificent day ahead.

She was bathing on some far of
tropical island.

And her mind was carefree and relaxed.

She thought back home to her real life in
England just the other day.

At work, typing away.
And James her mate from work
said. "Do you fancy taking a few
days off and going for a breakaway
abroad in the sunshine"?

"Yes", she said without hesitation.

So that night after work. They found
this fantastic late deal online. And
the boss gave the time off.

And here they are now.

James. Comes back, hands her a cold
iced filled cocktail drink.

And they both click their glass
and say cheers and smile.

"Great weather we are having", James
says with a wicked grin on his face.



© 2018 Dawn



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I didn't want it to end. Beautiful poem by all means.
While I was reading, I felt the sun rays penetrating my skin and the pineapple scent from the cocktail they were drinking.. thank you!

Posted 6 Days Ago


How wonderful this would be.
:)

So nice Dawn. This made me smile.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

Thanks Ana.
wishful thinking come to fruition. spur of the moment getaway. sounds like time won't be the only thing taken off! clever stuff made me smile jealously ... :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

Pete you made me laugh out loud. To your reply. Nice one thanks. hugs Dawn.
Is it bikini bottom time in the Bahamas? wink wink!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

Oh good yes, Crippled Queen.

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Added on November 8, 2018
Last Updated on November 8, 2018
Tags: last minute deal, break, vacation, holiday, calm, relaxe, sun

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Dawn
Dawn

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Dawn



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