None stop...

None stop...

A Poem by Dawn

Sometimes I feel,
I am just an emotional wreck.

And I am living off my nervous
and turning out,
nonstop poetic drivel
to ease my woes
and suffering.

My mind is whirling around
and around
never stopping or sleeping
on a constant loop
it goes around.

Thinking of this
and thinking of that.

Not stopping
always something
is playing on
inside my mind.
Hurry hurry hurry or
you will be late.

For insomnia and sleep.
That is for babies and wimps.
It's more mental exhaustion
anxiety and stress.
Of everyday living
that is
upsetting me so.

F**k this.. f**k that.
f**k everyone.

I am superhuman
oh, Christ!
No, I am NOT.

BURNT OUT then finally fast asleep
in a comatosed state of exhaustion.

© 2018 Dawn



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I do understand this poem. Too much to do and no time to do.
"BURNT OUT then finally fast asleep
in a comatosed state of exhaustion."
One day, a week. I must stop and rest. Thank you Dawn for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

I get the impression you work far to hard Coyote. Need to rest and rejuvenate. And thank you. Dawn.
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Grandchildren, work and I must read and write. A busy man stayed out of trouble. You are welcome Daw.. read more
Dawn

1 Week Ago

that is very true Coyote, wise words. :)



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Life sweeps us up and away, takes us to places and into situations we don't ask for, don't want but accept.. because we feel we should. Maybe, just maybe, we should just stand and look.. and look.. and see? We're not puppets, strung up like trussed chickens etc. We're born cussers and shouters who have the right to yell - and sleep.. and stop.. and think.. and write and.. be.

Wonderful writing, Dawn, finely laid, emotionally uttered and consequently felt by yours truly... and undoubtedly your loving fans. Thank you for each and every word - now then.. GO SLEEP, GIRL!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

5 Days Ago

Thanks emmajoy
emmajoy

5 Days Ago

Glad and willing to give you time and thought, Dawn.
I feel this as my head is always moving around in thought and sometimes I just want it to stop. I write poems too to get out my thoughts. I wish the best for you.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

5 Days Ago

Ryan, I relate big time to you, and it does help, use your writing to heal you and help you feel bet.. read more
A poetic tale familiar to anyone who's driven to write.
Powerfully portrayed, Dawn!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

5 Days Ago

Thank you Frank, kind of you to say. bless you. Dawn.
WOW!! very strong wording and very well presented. I enjoyed this write.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

5 Days Ago

Thanks Hoosier Girl.
Hoosier Girl

5 Days Ago

not a problem... Keep writing always
Dawn

5 Days Ago

thanks you.
It happens with everyone. Today's fast paced lifestyle is setting things in a wrong direction. It's now about how fast you can do instead of how good you can do. No one seem to understand the value of getting a break for good.

Posted 6 Days Ago


Dawn

5 Days Ago

well said and totally agree with you. Thanks for your thoughts. Dawn.
Wow! A lot of deepness to this write. nicely presented

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

6 Days Ago

Thanks dalton.
dalton

6 Days Ago

not a problem
Such a wonderful write here. Not much on cuss words, But i did enjoy the write. wonderful write

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

6 Days Ago

I have my moments on cuss words believe me LOL. Glad you enjoyed the read. thanks Dawn.
I do relate to this one here, but I suppose we all feel like this at times...ah, if only a thing as being a superhuman existed...Living through it all and surviving still is what makes us humans though..
The mind never stops thinking, unfortunately.
Good write, Dawn.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

Thank you Dr. Yumnakay, I take that a big compliment from you that it's a good write. bless you Dawn.. read more
So powerfully moving, deeply impassioned... I am certain a lot of us here can relate too well to these struggles, this aching life, the emotions ripping through us like a wild river. Your words speak into us and let us know we're not alone in our suffering... May we all find peace.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

Thank you, An owl on the moon for your thoughts bless you. Dawn.
I do understand this poem. Too much to do and no time to do.
"BURNT OUT then finally fast asleep
in a comatosed state of exhaustion."
One day, a week. I must stop and rest. Thank you Dawn for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

I get the impression you work far to hard Coyote. Need to rest and rejuvenate. And thank you. Dawn.
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Grandchildren, work and I must read and write. A busy man stayed out of trouble. You are welcome Daw.. read more
Dawn

1 Week Ago

that is very true Coyote, wise words. :)

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