Gone?

Gone?

A Poem by Dawn

Are you going to help?


Gone where?


No idea to be honest

He was here one day,

and gone the next?


He went to the local

corner shops

for me

to get some

milk.


And never

came home again.


When was this?


It was 2015 at 4:24 pm

which was a Saturday.


long silence...




© 2018 Dawn



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A good account of an actual occurrence.. wow.. very sad indeed.. I thought these words had a sad taint to them.. well crafted Dawn... N

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

2 Days Ago

Thanks Neville.
Neville Pettitt

2 Days Ago

my pleasure
That Saturday was the climax..

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

6 Days Ago

true........
Has the sad and anxious feeling of a missing person report. Hope it is not autobiographical.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

6 Days Ago

No it was not. But some young lad from our area a long time years ago. Went missing, got dropped off.. read more

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Added on December 5, 2018
Last Updated on December 5, 2018
Tags: missing, gone, disappeared, vanished, worried, devastated, upset, angry, sad, depressed, numb

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Dawn
Dawn

United Kingdom



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