Feeling Trapped

Feeling Trapped

A Poem by Dawn

The overwhelming feelings of
being and feeling trapped
and stuck,
suffocated,
frustrated, annoyed,
angry, upset, stressed
and depressed.

Feeling your life is
caving in and you just
can not get out.
Clawing like hell
to relieve the pressure
and tension that is building
and building up and up.
Way deep inside you.

To the point,
you are going to explode and scream and
shout. As loud
as you possibly can.

And burst some eardrums. And
you don't give a s**t who
hears. Or who even moans
at you. For doing it.
Just for you. To get it
all out.

Just to get some easy and
get some relief
from your feelings
and emotions of  being
cornered
and snared.

Stuck in cement. rock solid
going nowhere at all.

Pent-up emotions
disturbing and upsetting feelings.
Playing on your mind.

Needing to get it all out...

Feeling the pressure gauge snapping.

About to blow.. Here we go....
It's coming out.......Now!

Feeling better even more calmer.
Sorry I needed to do that.
Oh God.  I just wish I never felt
this bloody way...



© 2018 Dawn



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oh my...how we all can relate ...things that came to mind are how we try by using drink, drugs, sex, ... all kinds of things just to get around those conflicting, confusing, overwhelming feelings and thoughts that accompany them ... or thoughts then feeling ;)
anxiety the bitter enemy eh!? one can do nothing when in its grip ... facing ones self ... calm in the storm ... is the hard pill that when swallowed .. really does cure ;) i don't know about you, Dawn ... but that lesson seems to be so important it just keeps coming around and around and around .. messing with my little paradise built ;) arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! whew! i feel better now too ... love your to the bones honest poetry
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

I know what you mean Einstein, thanks for your thoughts. Dawn.
brokenwriter

1 Week Ago

This is so f*****g beautiful and sad. Such a honest poem makes me feel not alone in this big lost wo.. read more



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oh my...how we all can relate ...things that came to mind are how we try by using drink, drugs, sex, ... all kinds of things just to get around those conflicting, confusing, overwhelming feelings and thoughts that accompany them ... or thoughts then feeling ;)
anxiety the bitter enemy eh!? one can do nothing when in its grip ... facing ones self ... calm in the storm ... is the hard pill that when swallowed .. really does cure ;) i don't know about you, Dawn ... but that lesson seems to be so important it just keeps coming around and around and around .. messing with my little paradise built ;) arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! whew! i feel better now too ... love your to the bones honest poetry
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dawn

1 Week Ago

I know what you mean Einstein, thanks for your thoughts. Dawn.
brokenwriter

1 Week Ago

This is so f*****g beautiful and sad. Such a honest poem makes me feel not alone in this big lost wo.. read more

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Added on December 7, 2018
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Tags: feeling, trapped, cornered, stuck, rut, pressure, gauge, build-up, steam, vent, release, out, in

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Dawn
Dawn

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