AERODYNAMICALLY GIFTED

AERODYNAMICALLY GIFTED

A Poem by Orlando Furioso
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The voice here is that of the poems all around us. The Jack of Duds is the lost and lonely poet experiencing a magically blessed moment of revelation, of oneness with mother universe.

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We are the code they seek to crack
Beyond, behind, above, below
We are without* intelligence          
In primacy supreme we chyme
With otherness we deftly rhyme
Instinctuality alive
We show ourselves but now are gone
You can but breathe and sense us pass
Alone you are, alone, alone
Our conduit corporeal
You are so feeble in your form
O Jack of Duds, lost in the woods!

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We are the code they'll never crack

 Sir Nothing stretched out on the wrack

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© 2012 Orlando Furioso



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We are the code they'll never crack... this explains it all,,,nice read

Posted 8 Months Ago


Poems all around us beyond, behind, above, below all connected to the aptly named universe....... nice write, very cryptic.

Posted 9 Months Ago


I like the cryptic tone and surreal/esoteric/mystsery herein.

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Posted 9 Months Ago


Quite an intersting and intriguing read. Enjoyed it though

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Posted 9 Months Ago


A lot of these poems are definitely uncrackable.

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Posted 9 Months Ago


Orlando Furioso

9 Months Ago

:))) yep, I am mindful of that. I like writing nice open ones, but the odd complex one sneaks in! T.. read more
Not quiet myself today .. I'll return and reread .. so I may better understand ..

Jasmine :)

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Posted 9 Months Ago



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