TAKE DOWN BULLDOG

TAKE DOWN BULLDOG

A Poem by R J Askew
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~ FLASH~BRASH ~ ~ ~ CLASH~CRASH ~ ( ...tis a gentle satire... )

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Play?

Play?

Yes? you want to play?

Bring your best

I'll bring one of mine

THIS ONE!

Play?

Too late, my friend

Too...sloooow

Shall we be friends now?

You and I

I will be loyal

On that you may count

And I will amuse

O yes, I will amuse

But there will be days

Such as this

When I thrust my poetry into yours

And ask you what you've got

That I might know

What I've got

No pretty-pretty-word-words!

Come on! COME ON!

I'm mad for more!

PHYSICAL!

Be physical with me

THAT'S! more like it!

Resist me!

Hit me!

Make me feel the FIGHT in you!

Hit me!

Come on, hit me!

YES! YES!

Not dull!

Never dull!

Never ever -- you and I -- NEVER...dull

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 R J Askew


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Sexual undertones? Lol. Masochistic sex, maybe.
Hmm...a gentle satire...could be a look at Slam, the way performances become battles and personal, like the rap scene. We're all friends now, but in a few minutes I'll be raggin' on yo' a*s kind of thing?
Ah, the self-absorbed interpretation...I'm thinking about that, therefore so are you lol.

Honestly, I'm not sure what this is about. Sizing our own work up by comparing it to that of others?

I bet it's very entertaining aloud, with a lot of scope for varying volume.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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bold. sounds like ure looking for a fight. i like it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an ode for joint writing. if any readers of combined work ever wondered how it was made you have revealed the secrets....I'm not venturing to comment further!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have joined such wonderful thoughts in this work... love the Churchill picture with this... most illuminating. Such a fabulous work. I will refrain from violence, however... left that in my other personality. LOL Cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Your competition is a muse. Tempting, teasing, frustrating, and eluding. But those moments, when you and your muse collide. . . the Earth trembles.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

it has a raw physical movement. it is unique in the way each of your writings are

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Sexual undertones? Lol. Masochistic sex, maybe.
Hmm...a gentle satire...could be a look at Slam, the way performances become battles and personal, like the rap scene. We're all friends now, but in a few minutes I'll be raggin' on yo' a*s kind of thing?
Ah, the self-absorbed interpretation...I'm thinking about that, therefore so are you lol.

Honestly, I'm not sure what this is about. Sizing our own work up by comparing it to that of others?

I bet it's very entertaining aloud, with a lot of scope for varying volume.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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