YOU AND i

YOU AND i

A Poem by Orlando Furioso
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Into language we go...endescopesque.

"

EEE -- REX -- EEE -- CLEE -- A -- TIX -- EEE

 

Cameleopard verb of scyllababble

 

Excite mates relax to make ... erxecliatxe

 

EEE -- REX -- EEE -- CLEE -- A -- TIX -- EEE

 

EEE -- REX -- EEE

 

EEE -- REX

 

EEE

 

                            CLEE -- A -- TIX

 

    CLEE -- A -- TIX

 

    A -- TIX!

 

                  A -- TIX!

                           

                      AAA -- TIX -- EEE

 

 AAA -- TIX -- EEE

 

You

 

I richly CLEE -- A -- TIX

 

You EEE -- REX -- EEE -- CLEE -- A -- TIX -- EEE me

 

Shall we? SHALL WE? Shall ... we?

 

Because we can ... youandi


© 2008 Orlando Furioso



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I had an endoscopic episode. Saw the little camera wandering around my stomach. At the time all that was found was a little ulcer - funnily enough this was a result of someone else so I like the ending to this. Fortunately when she vanished she took the ulcer with her, sadly she took my daughter as well.

This is a little odd isn't it? Would like to hear the spoken word version.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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to me this says, how many layers has a communication in a relationship ... and how people easily can twist syllables and make a new meaning...and I can imagine that in long lasting relationships the communication becomes a way stereotype.....I also somehow have read the word "cleenex" even you didn't have it down. you see: now this is direct experience that we hear things which were not spoken.....ha ! this was raffinesse en detail piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I'm a bit thick! I just cannot grasp this no matter how hard I try, I can't get my head around it...
Sorry Ron, I wish I could find a thread other than CLEE--A--TIX...??????????????? Baffled...
Helen :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Did wonna dem wontz thought they missed a turn or two awoke wondwerin

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wonder if I looked at me and him with such detail what I might find. . . ? We've been a long time married, probably scarier than an ulcer.

I like the way you make playthings out of words and sounds. So many are intimidated by the little creatures.

Posted 4 Years Ago


ok, I am just basking in the sounds....not even attempting to make sense of it all. Sometimes you just need to mess about with words....
Nice verbal finger painting here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You're a maniac!!! A nice one though!!! What the hell do you call this Ron? Did you write it looking through a kaleidoscope or worse still a cystoscope! With a title like 'You and I' I was expecting something sedate and sexy...maybe if I go and take another look at it....no, don't think I'll find anything like that...
Sorry, LOL....I'm speechless, I'm without speech!
Cheers,
Helen :-))))

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL...too much like you, my dear...perfection in scyllababble. a closer look...look into my eyes and see all that you wanted to see and even more you never thought possible to see. Your humor (humour) shines through here once again. Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh I understand! It helps knowing what endescopesque is! Bravo!

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I had an endoscopic episode. Saw the little camera wandering around my stomach. At the time all that was found was a little ulcer - funnily enough this was a result of someone else so I like the ending to this. Fortunately when she vanished she took the ulcer with her, sadly she took my daughter as well.

This is a little odd isn't it? Would like to hear the spoken word version.....

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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