THIS SINGULARITY OF HITS

So small as to be...

And yet of such moment

Sharp

This pointed performer

Nothing to speak of

This cursor coursing

Across the meniscus of mind

Leading you...

Be-curiousing you... forever on

Reviews

[mick weller]

Becuriousing,,,, Be-curiousing... hmm, yes it's a pity but you do need that dash...
...so sm as to be
neat though... like a little pointy `tickling stick` indeed
Becuriousing...hmm - you know, I think it stands alone
many writers have invented words - be one of those writers! Boldly go...
def. beckoning curiosity (?) a drawing-in... hmm, though supposedly `curiosity kills the cat`
forever on - till upgrade time - or `out of memory error`! or in my case just plain old lock-up
he he cheers

[Gandré]

It is so great and obvious how I inspirate here people. ha ha hah suddently so many got conscious.
Great small sweet piece. where did you go? why don't you step by? I don 't have a friends list. this doesn't mean that I don't have friends! I always find them. I prooved. ha hah.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great work - bemuse us all with your cursor...I have invented some words myself but can't say them on here I might get banned...anyway they still are delightful to encounter...what fun. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Gary H]

This is fascinating. All the lines can change and still fit the ambience of the poem yet I feel this was written as it was. Even took time out to find out the meaning of a new word - meniscus, noting the other new word here you have made up!

[Celtic Cat]

HA! You got me! And curiosity killed the cat, d****t! : ) Man....you know how to light up a room, my friend. No matter the subject. Ah....to see life through your eyes. Wonderful.

[TL Boehm]

smart words - the clicking nemesis that is both my elixir and my poison. This addiction.
Well written. Succinct. Yet deep. deep. deep.

[Hedra Helix]

hee, seriously, somedays (cloudy days) that f****r is my bestest friend. he shows me some good s**t.