AT THE END OF THIS LINE YOU'LL FIND

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Lips, mouth, tongue, throat, a man made blood

For you to touch, for you to feel

For you, for you, for you to know

To kiss this inspiration wild

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Reach! reach, through metaphysics new

Reach, hold, keep, this rib-cage dream

Deeply, deeping, deeper downing

Drowing in this pulse of being

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Lipsome, licking, lapping, lusting

Life force panting surgent triumph

Lips, lipping, touching fingers kiss

A man, a life, a love, alive

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At the end of this flood you'll find

Hot bliss of love deep in your mind

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Reviews

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

yes, most definitely and urgency built and built in this hot piece. Wow!

[Mockingbird]

there's an urgency to it. they say there's a natural high that comes from having an earth-shattering o. (i'm shy)

[....]

A very passionate read that is lovely,
Poetic as well, Enjoyable to read.

[Ken Simm.]

I have got to like Lipsome. Alliteration works very well here Ron.

[Mi Wae]

could feel the passion and overwhelming desire in this poem... saying 'at the end of this flood' brings the imagery and overflowing emotion clear.. the repetition of words and sounds (for you and 'ing') and then linking it with watery power (drown, lapping) makes it all work.

very emotive and captivating.. great work!

[Shaun Payton]

Fun to read. A sweet kind of cool poem.

[Between the grey]

I found this impressive, heart felt and wonderful.

[Mellie]

I love this poem it is really heart felt

Good write :)

[Lina Grey]

Great write. I probably interpreted it a bit differently than others, but I still liked it very much. Thank you.

[Chris Yip]

I don't usually read poems but I enjoyed this one!! It ends with a good rhyme, and in time!! Short and sweet with a definite style of your own. A different angle and approach to love making!!?? Keep up the good poetic work.

Note: Hope you review my unfinished novel.