Like A Cat

Like A Cat

A Poem by Carnation
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You are like a cat, my dear.

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You are like a cat, my dear,
You vanish as quick as light.
But if I put a leash on you,
You shall never be out of sight.

Yet if I put a leash on you,
You will never be free.
You won't be able to roam the earth,
Sailing the great blue seas.

So what if I put a bell on you,
You can travel anywhere.
And all I have to ever do,
Is listen for the bell, is that fair.

You are like a cat, my dear,
You vanish as quick as light.
But if I put a bell on you,
You shall never be hard to find.

© 2013 Carnation


Author's Note

Carnation
Just made it up in my head like..., 10 seconds ago.
At least it's something! I finally got out of my Writers Block (I think!).

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Nice meter and rhyme for this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Honestly, I think if you put a beat to this it would make for a good song. Maybe a soft indie song. Death Cab for Cutie maybe?

It flows nicely. Not much to be said besides it's cutes. :3

I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A good rhyming poem and subject matter. I hope she takes it in a good way...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


You need to seriously teach me how to make poems like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Whoa, it's cute and greatly written, my dear your mind was just taking a break and was filled with cob webs but now creativity was spewed out of it. Great job there (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


It flows nicely like a Song ^-^
10 seconds have paid very good :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved it. Its a really adorable piece. :) It reminded me of my dog Angel. She was extremely sneaky to the point of it scaring us so we put a bell on her neck to hear her coming.

She held the bell in her mouth when she walked around. >_<

But anyways you're a very talented writer. Keep it up. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


wonderful, cute write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow cute and beautiful poem, love it. The cat sometimes get lost, they usually like exploring things outside because of their curiosity. Nice penned Friend. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

lol but still this is amazing work my friend. I know your genius in writing as I already read some o.. read more
Carnation

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words again. You're a great friend!
Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

:) Always.

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Added on April 15, 2013
Last Updated on April 15, 2013
Tags: cat, like, bell, leash, vanish, light, free, earth, sea, travel, listen, see, sight

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