Eternal Gaze

Eternal Gaze

A Poem by oursong2

I wake up one day
This day I am alive
I don’t know what to do
It’s the first day of my life

They open up the windows
I flutter my eyes
This world it is brand new
I look at the sky

I see the sun set
Please tell me it will rise
I don’t know which way to go
I look into your smile

Then without knowing
You pull me in so tight
You tell me that you love me
I am your first child

Oh mother
I feel your warm embrace
I love you
With a blank stare on my face

I am yours forever
Time cannot erase
You are my sunshine
My eternal gaze

© 2018 oursong2


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Honestly, I loved the turn out. Being as the title is Eternal Gaze and the way you wrote the beginning, I thought it was about vampires lol. I reread it once I realized it was about a mother and I it was a nice plot twist on my end. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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oursong2
oursong2

wildwood, MO



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