Stardust | | The Online Writing Community


A Poem by thelux

A poem about the night sky that I've fallen in love with that turned into being about a lot of amazing people I've come across and about some people who I will meet in the future.

They say that we're all connected to each other
In one way or another
And technically, we are
The chemicals and atoms that dance throughout our bodies
They're all the same
With similar goals and even more similar journeys
It might be something to brush off 
But not when you look at her
It's obvious that she's a child of the universe
For she has stardust in her eyes
Her thoughts so complex, like constellations
Her temper as hot as the sun
Her face glows brighter than all the stars in the sky
And her ambitions as high up as the moon 

© 2015 thelux

Author's Note

I'm not a big fan of the repetitive "her blank blank blank" near the ending, but it's not too big of a problem for. Criticism appreciated :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Added on July 31, 2015
Last Updated on July 31, 2015
Tags: universe, stars, space, sky, night



Spring, TX

I'm just an amateur writer who seeks recognition. I mostly write poetry but I also write short stories, screenplays, etc. I'm a big fan of the universe and all its phenomenons but most of my works are.. more..

Lugosi Lugosi

A Poem by thelux