A symbol of stars and stripes

A symbol of stars and stripes

A Poem by outspoken1234
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"When we honor our flag we honor what we stand for as a nation- freedom, equality, justice, and hope"~ Ronald Reagan

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There's a flag that hangs in a corner
Watching over a class each day 
He never moves only stays
His stripes are white and red
Upon his head are bright white stars
The represent freedom and peace
He's quiet and mute but stands tall with pride
For he has nothing to hide
He's strong and meek like his brothers alike
Many classes have gone and come in his time
Some fight to defend him and others come to mend him
Once he's close to seventy years old
All tattered and worn
He wants to be cremated and turned to ash 
Wanting nothing more then respect
He only wants his remains scattered
Among the vets 

© 2016 outspoken1234


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Your personification of a flag is very unexpected & original. While I share these same impressions of our flag, I never thought of it as a "he"! I also think it's wise & interesting for you to describe the "end-of-life" for him . . . many people do not realize there's a particular way to do this, which you've captured in an imaginative way, while still adhering to tradition.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

7 Years Ago

Thank you that is what I was hoping to accomplish.



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Your personification of a flag is very unexpected & original. While I share these same impressions of our flag, I never thought of it as a "he"! I also think it's wise & interesting for you to describe the "end-of-life" for him . . . many people do not realize there's a particular way to do this, which you've captured in an imaginative way, while still adhering to tradition.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

7 Years Ago

Thank you that is what I was hoping to accomplish.

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Added on April 26, 2016
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I am 19 currently and love to write poetry it helps me think and clear my head and understand my emotions. I want my poetry to help others who might understand or are going through some of the things .. more..

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