Clothing

Clothing

A Poem by *Always be Me:)*

What to wear,

What to wear.

As I look around

In my closet

I see so many shirts,

Jackets,

Pants and

My favorite shoes!

I wonder to myself,

Why does this take so long?

I do not know, but let me tell ya

I like clothes LOL!!!

© 2010 *Always be Me:)*


Author's Note

*Always be Me:)*
totally random, i have no idea why i thought of this o well :) lol

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i love clothes -- i really enjoy beach clothes a lot better than regular clothes -- birthday suits always have and will be number one in my book -- loved the idea sent on money soon to be spent

Posted 13 Years Ago


Being a man. My wife wish I would try more clothing. I'm content with jeans and t-sheet. A excellent poem. Life should have the opportunity to feel good and special. Cloths can do that. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute and to the point!

Posted 13 Years Ago


good.....cloths realy does cover our nakedness,,it really might be understandable in different forms.,.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So very true. I love how this relates to life. I feel the same way. Never can find what I want to wear and be perfectly happy with it. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Know that feeling lol
Such a simple task can turn into a nightmare!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a good poem. Your inner-dialogue is very realistic. Although it's subject is pretty out there, I can already see you progressing as a writer, and that made me happy. Your punctuation is much better and clearer. Your repetition of the first line is very realistic and rhetorically effective. My only suggestion is in the second-to-last line, I think a contraction of "do not" would be better. But, that it mostly a me-thing. Overall, great poem. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome perfect personification of the female mind lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very funny nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful, i like my clothing as well.
Hey to part with the old stuff too. It's comfy!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hello, my name is Michaela. I am 28 yrs old and single! I have brown hair and dark greenish blue eyes. I graduated last year....amazing feelings :). I'm 5'3" and I weigh about 140lbs. I love to hang o.. more..

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