Fighting for my Life

Here in this world

We fight for our lives.

Sometimes we fight for others.

"Everything will be ok"

That's what we always hear.

But are we sure

Sure that everything will be ok?

No not always my friend

You have to fight for what you want

Even if you don't want to.

Here we are in this world

Fighting for our Lives.

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

Good one ... keep it up

[Allison]

This is really deep!

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Some deep thoughts in this one.

[Taylor H.]

nice peom. Very deep

[kypruss]

so true and great.

[Jen]

I agree 100%...great work

[angelm]

we can all understand what your trying to say. and the thing is, its all true. thats life for you. but its how we deal and change it that makes a difference. very well done.

[~ Otto Girl ~]

Very very true. Love the poem.

[PoppySilver]

So true hon!
A lovely poem:) xx

[Chassitie Linnaea Nicol..]

love it