5/5/09

Fast poem I thought of in 8th period....not the best, but critics are good

After more than a year I still don't know who I am

So many decisions

So many paths to take

Too many choices to make

Everyday, I'm right in the middle of a fork in the road

Snickers, Whispers, Gossip

When will this stop!

I walk down that path

Then the other path

And everytime....It's the wrong decision.

I need that time machine

Tilt that hourglass back

God please save me

Everyday It's the same thing

Wrong decisions

Drama at every corner

I can't escape

I can't breathe

Fake faces at every person

My many different personalities

Who am I?

Does anyone care?

Does anyone realize?

Trust no longer exists

Everyone seems to let me down

"Please don't change"

But, everyone gets older

Expect the unexpected

New friends bump out the old

Too many hearts turned cold

Faces turn towards me

I am my worst enemy

 

Reviews

[Becca :)]

omg tiff that is really really good. and i am being completely honest, not sarcastic or anything. i really really like that. and i can totally relate to it too. i know exactly how you feel. nice job. that's a really really good piece.

p.s. if you are feeling really bad and dont know where to turn, you know you can always talk to me. im here for you. i always will be.