foggy road

foggy road

A Poem by paras
"

life is a journey and no road is long with company.Way to go

"
The journey i covered so far
like money collected in a jar
is not worthy if i lose now
if i decide to give up somehow

In my lifetime i learned a lesson
It was of those days i was a kid and ate melon
my well wisher - an angel told me 
i can be a hero
But also warned me its non-worthy
if i didn't gave effort
 coz everything multiplied by zero is zero

For how far i drove i came by myself
no thanks to others 
no need for bothers
its all my own route

I am the captain of my soul
I know whats coming to me, for me
i know what would it be
death or suffering, maybe

With confidence in me
and support of others be

Lies before the path in front
to cross or to stay is my option
choices are to be made
but you don't get to choose
that you have to make the choices wide awake

This way is harder for me
obstacles are coming but i cannot see
I have to move right away
carrying my confidence aboard
I have to anyway by myself
cross this 'Foggy Road'

© 2014 paras


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very nicely penned. Life is like a road, its a process to go through, to pass through, to ride the riddles along the way. Its passage to towards a better you in the end.

Posted 10 Years Ago


paras

10 Years Ago

thanks alot am glad you liked it :)
Nicely penned. I see confidence as your armour to get through the obstacles in life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


paras

10 Years Ago

well thanks and i must say somebody got an eye of eagle :D
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment.
Such an excellent piece wrote with heart and soul. Excellent work. Bravo!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


paras

10 Years Ago

am glad you liked it.!!
Stanley King

10 Years Ago

It's a true work of art and I look forward to reading more from you :-)
paras

10 Years Ago

i'll try my best to keep up :)
Poignant self affirming and asserting choice. Good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


paras

10 Years Ago

thanks alot.!!:)
It's beautiful. Nice work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


paras

10 Years Ago

thanks alot .!! :)

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Added on January 4, 2014
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Tags: life, journey, fog, road, hardship, faith

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paras
paras

jalandhar, punjab, India



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