everything is breaking

A coma structure I am,

                       I play (romanticize) forever binding stars.

           'Till dusk. "till dusk ('till dusk?)

                                          (Why (you) am (aren't) I (coming) waiting (back?) for you?)

        It's all glass,

The lips, chalk sidewalks, this, Sunday mornings, and I. and I and I and I and I and I.....

                                                     Am the corpse wrecking ball.

          Good(bye) Loss

                              Dr(every)eam(thing)s

                'till dusk, 'till dusk ('till dusk?)

                                                  Forever binding stars.

                                            It's all I believe it to be.

                                                                  'till dusk?

                                                                          no.............

                                                                                       it's all glass.

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Flight of imagination. A fool's paradise. A delusion. Fantasy. However we call it, it is a freedom of choice which each of us is free to enact. A state of mind where anything can happen. Boundless. The structure of the piece is very strange and unique to the point of being amazing. Artistic.

[New Dawn]

Had to read it a few times to understand the conflict within. Unique write - I really enjoyed it