From Big Bang to the Big Crunch

From Big Bang to the Big Crunch

A Poem by Sagar Patil
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[Palindrome Poetry]

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!Aloha says Lord
?here waiting of dream, ever...
now slowly faded cosmos expanded
end of start began then...
Alas! heard was roar Deafening, then prolonged silence persisted.

Logic was eternally evaded
now, before time and space had existed
?God sang merrily, as careless he was
Point became universe gradually
Out, let be there light

Aura, unknown was cast ubiquitously
Stars twinkling were happy not sad
All tamed time, So crucially be it
everyone bullied fate always now
rays circumvented and baffled traps

?Dark matter and black holes which are always invisible
coolly shining suns converged, became hot
there was elation universal no, apocalypse
Condensed things expanded
Attraction that they wanted

From Big Bang to the Big Crunch ...

Wanted they that attraction
Expanded things condensed
apocalypse, no universal elation was there
hot became converged suns shining coolly
Invisible always are which holes black and matter dark?

traps baffled and circumvented rays
now always fate bullied everyone
It be crucially so, time tamed all
Sad not happy were twinkling stars
Ubiquitously cast was unknown aura

Light there be let out
Gradually universe became point
was he careless, as merrily sang god?
existed had space and time before now
evaded eternally was logic

Persisted silence prolonged then, deafening roar was heard, alas!
...then began start of end
expanded cosmos faded slowly now
...ever, dream of waiting here?
Lord says Aloha!
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© 2010 Sagar Patil


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I had written my view about this poem before in PL, I suppose.
One of the greatest poems I have read. Amazing! :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Sagar Patil
Sagar Patil

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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