In debris and ash

In debris and ash

A Poem by Patricia
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Some things cannot be avoided, even though you thought you could. But nevermind life is not plannable anyway so I guess it's not so bad.

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I watched you burn
Suffering in debris
You watch me burn
And I try to flee

I watched you avert
In cardinal directions
You watch me avert
In circular sections

Haunted by the storm
Devastated by the flood
Tears are falling like a swarm
Except I am crying blood

© 2015 Patricia



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This is phenomenal! I was captivated with this from the first line and you really wrapped it up well. Perfect length also!

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Patricia

2 Years Ago

What a beautiful compliment thank you for reading and reviewing:)!
Very heartfelt write. Imagery`s well depicted in words written with your insights.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Horizons

2 Years Ago

I`m sure, you know how to get inside my heart. You fascinating. Well, yeah, i`m a reader so, yes, I .. read more
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Patricia

2 Years Ago

I think thats the most amazing thing anybody has ever written to me! Thank you so much this is such .. read more
This is beautiful and so heartfelt. I absolutely loved it. Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Patricia

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and your wonderful comment:)!
That is brilliant writing, i like how you weaved emotions into your words. Good job.

Thank you for sharing.
Angad

Posted 2 Years Ago


Patricia

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and for your reading!
Angad Waraich

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome ma'am. Keep writing. :)

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Added on January 15, 2015
Last Updated on April 1, 2015
Tags: burn, turn, blood, devastation, suffer, debris, ash, flee, storm, haunted, tears, falling, you, me

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Patricia
Patricia

Germany



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My art is a conversation I never want to have and confessions I can't pronounce. It's just my undefined emotions coping with messy situations and relations. I always appreciate a reader! My tumblr:.. more..

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