I wish you knew

My love is somehow always in arrear

I wish you knew

But how could that be

Our view

The fog conceals

We cannot see

 

It condenses

Onto my skin

Senses

Making me spin

Through and within

 

I wish you knew

How I really feel

With you

The ego-ideal

Archieved surreal

Blow the fog away

Just as my fears

you may

And dry my tears

Love in arrears

 

Reviews

[Robert]

A heart telling piece Patricia. The stanzas are laid out beautifully and with such thought. Sometime to let someone know how you feel you have to straight out let them know. At time people you have feelings for just might be totally clueless and they need that straight talk.

[Patricia]

Thank you very much for your nice comment! I know and I am kind of on to that

[guy drori]

I liked your enjabments- they gave a very nice flow to the poem. Interesting choice of words as well. Somewhat simple yet tangle the poem a bit (Which I liked)

[Patricia]

Thank you very much!

[Stephen]

Very nice. I enjoyed this poem aswell. Thanks for sharing

[Patricia]

Thank you very much!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[wordman]

you did a wonderful job on this write

[Patricia]

Thank you!