Falling

fallen for you

Falling in 

and out

of love

Not falling apart

But falling into

 

something different

and through

Fallen for much and many

For some and any

Look who I fall onto

It is love

And love comes with you

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

[Willard Wells]

I like your work and content. The flow is not there for me. Another read and you may fine some little adjustments you can make. I would make a suggestion, but for this poem I am left empty of thought. Sorry.

[Patricia]

Thank you for your honest comment! I propably will work on it, because also feel it is more like a raw idea.