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A Poem by paul

i saw another killer 
on the street today

the sky was black
but the stars were in the way.


infinity's stalk me

like the earth is surrounded
by the sea.

© 2013 paul



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The metaphor use is awesome, you are surrounded be careful, lol
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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I heard that in space you cannot see the stars, that everything is dark. Yet when I close my eyes at night I see flecks of light

Posted 2 Years Ago


yes, stalked by infinity, we are surrounded by sea...and one day that is all there will be again...

the circle of human life will end in blackness...and the stars will disappear.

nice short and tight write...with a heartbeat of its own.

Posted 3 Years Ago


paul

3 Years Ago

great review. great writing
Infinities stalk me..
Can I ever be completely free?

Thanks for your words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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:: wow... life does feel as eerie as that sometimes...

:: excellent work, coach... your brilliance never ceases to amaze and inspire me...

Posted 3 Years Ago



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