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A Poem by paul

there's crimes to be committed

snow is on the ground today.

footprints are everywhere

© 2014 paul



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Guilty footsteps obscured by the many more innocent?
Grabbing my tools of the trade; calling "Jimmy the Lock."
Let'd so this thing!


Posted 2 Years Ago


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I felt the same way when they cut down a majestic oak at the quarry for being in the way of bulldozers

Posted 2 Years Ago


Allegorical and eloquent.

Posted 3 Years Ago


traces of the criminal activity...nature trespassed, a beautiful scene robbed of its innocence...

i really like your style.

Posted 3 Years Ago


paul

3 Years Ago

Thanks man.
Brittany

3 Years Ago

love it lol
'snow is on the ground today.'

almost a haiku but so much better. as if the footprints are of the thief? maybe he won't get away scot free. I enjoyed this a lot. fantastic.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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:: that's a scary thought, coach... but you create the atmosphere really well with just a few words... sheer brilliance...

Posted 3 Years Ago



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