infin

infin

A Poem by paul

cities in the night

stars in the sky

infinity
and me

waiting to die.

© 2015 paul



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The diction,
The irony,
Ah--your every word feels so good on the tongue and in the mind.

Posted 1 Year Ago


but infinity will go on forever, as will the soul of who we are--long after we are physically gone...maybe we will become one of those stars. Like the brevity here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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pssst...just saying, infinity's been waiting an awfully long time. Patient, don't ya think?

Posted 2 Years Ago


hopefully somewhere in between you get a chance to live, with a cherry on top

Posted 2 Years Ago


paul

2 Years Ago

sometimes i escape to manhattan and wander, studying gardens and parks and skylines.
traverse.. read more
Don't be so clueless.. waiting to die.. I would rather love this life...
I liked the expression in your work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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~~ and me too... ~~ sometimes... life just feels so exacting...

~~ ravishing poetry, coach... ~~ you write the history of the universe in just a few words...

Posted 2 Years Ago


paul

2 Years Ago

Thank you Serah. i can always count on you
and your words .
.

2 Years Ago

~~ my privilege, coach... always... ad infinitum... :P

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