i sky

i sky like the ground

i sweat like the sun

everywhere infinity is just

another one

all these years 

alone at sea

madness is a wave

overcoming me

Reviews

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. overwhelming, paul ... remarkably stunning and profound ... it's like walking into the sea in the middle of the night ... and not caring even for a fleeting moment about the consequences because nothing worse can happen ... the title is outstanding and the opening line takes my breath away ... but it's the last four lines that transcend profundity ... and speak of an existence ... that is beyond the threshold of isolation ... vandalized beyond even a desire for redemption ... absolutely ravishing poetry, coach ... you are a genius like no other ... but more than that ... you are a human like no other ... you're the best, coach ...

[Crinkle°]

all these variations are very delightful...

[.]

the first two lines were extraordinary..a depth to the meaning...amazing

[SpokenWord]

solitude comes to mind, being alone on the ocean with only the waves to keep you company and like them the mind becomes filled with madness. It is during these times that one could have some deep reflextions about who they are and the meaning of this or that. If they don't have a strong foundation then indeed they can go mad having nothing solid to hold onto and they would be swept away by one of those crashing waves.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Madness is a wave that overcomes everyone once in a lifetime..at the least.

[em]

- wow - absolutely inspiring - truly amazing - and i agree with serah - unbelievably profound -

infinity times madness
madness times the sky
alone is alone
just another one

- you're inspiring, master!! -

[Ed Hart]

it may seem like 'madness'...but the 'mad' do not see it coming, and deny it when it arrives

[Robin]

one of your profound pieces ..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a visual of sole survivor dreaming himself through the clouds covered in mortality on a raft adrift to ghost forevermore~ moving and evokes such deep feeling and imagery~