scared

scared to backflip

out of my mind

it's a strange universe to swim in

if you're not a fish

Reviews

[. serah .]

indeed
the backflip
is the toughest
flip for a non-fish

[.]

And yet such beauties soar in this strange universe!
You got me completely backflipped...wonderful:)

[piggy]

joy to the fishes in the deep blue sea
joy to you and me

i dunno, it just popped right out when i read your piece

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

You are a gifted writer..you have such a charming way with words.Indeed it is a strange universe to swim in if you are not a fish.

[Raymond]

Ok, so Paul is an existentalist minimalist (I may be making that term up) so keeping in that vein I will review all his work here. Brilliant in the choice of minimum words that capture maximum thoughts, and thoughts upon thoughts. The evidence of its excellence is the poem is far shorter than this review...and I said not nearly as much.

[Sel Whiteley]

Love these metaphors, they're exquisite in both stanzas.

[E.Gleaves]

Interesting. " it's a strange universe to swim in if you're not a fish." the world/universe is a scary place, especially if your different. at least it's my interpretation

[.]

LOL...surreal

[KellieJeanne]

I love how simple yet intriguing this is. It's also very easy to relate to, which is great for the reader.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

How plain and unapologetic. I admire your pluck and courage, may we see grea things from you in future?, yes I think we can!