alone

alone in the night

infinity running scams

in the cold clear

moonlight

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

The irony here is the conclusion. "Cold and clear" is the conclusion.
I especially like the usage of the word scams whose coloquial quality
is foil for the otherwise simple intensity here; no punctuation
often means no beginning or ending.....thanks again. hder

[Wondering Mind]

laconic-deep

[flyingdreams]

by keeping the verses so short, you have made the picture in my mind more powerful. good work.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

What is infinity indeed..so much within and beyond my grasp :)

[Emily Burns]

this draws pictures in my mind and makes my heart beat harder

[Siddhartha]

And we poor humans never seem to get the hang of it...

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

very nicely crafted

[SkinlessFrank]

scams we can never comprehend

[Ed Hart]

standing in the cold clear night
beneath the stars iridescent light
watching the infinity make strawberry scams

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Twelve mesmerizing words, creating a thread of contemplation that lasts for days...
Yo are a remarkable poet, my friend.