Hear Me...

My take on life

Hear Me...

Did anyone hear the sound of existence?
The pace of resistance.
It crawled down my spine like realisation
It whispered with temptation
Rise! It yelled
Realise! It scolded me
I heard that sound but still questioned, could it be?
Could this be what I’ve been waiting to see?
I write of thoughts I fantasise about
Of a reality most unspoken about
Now did anyone hear the thud?
The anger of persistence
It engraved itself in my thoughts
It signed, sealed and delivered greatness
There’s no room for lies nor fakeness
I won’t bother nor listen
I won’t ignore gravity
Rather allow the unknown to cause insanity
Listen to me as I speak truth
Dwell with me to the pastor’s booth
Today we lay our confessions naked
Why cry about poverty when your thoughts are not sacred
Listen to my story one day
I will tell it before you lay
It might lead you to understand and pray
But listen to the announcement in my silence
Grief and cry to my ignorance
Hear me as my pen dances on paper
I had written this for you, to reflect on later...

Author's Note

Pls do let me kno what u think

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Bravo! thank god i was about to just leave and i stumbled upon this piece..

i really enjoyed your writing style immensely..
it kind of reminds me of.. me haha

keep it up you have real talent, thanks for letting us share in your thoughts

Antonio

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a bold statement you are making.Your pen has spoken and spoken wisely.I really like this:)

[Sami Khalil]

"I write of thoughts I fantasise about
Of a reality most unspoken about
Now did anyone hear the thud?
The anger of persistence
It engraved itself in my thoughts "

I enjoyed this poem alot...Thank you for penning...:)..................

[Pearl Tshetlo]

oh thank u for the review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)................

[Pearl Tshetlo]

i jst added a new write titled a writers confession, pls do read and let me kno.

[Antoñyo]

An announcement shouted as dark sword dipped in gentle ink; I have arrived...I have something to say.

Loved its bold spirit,
Thanks for the share!

[Pearl Tshetlo]

thank you for the review u give this work a whole new meaning

[Antoñyo]

I also give it a big "100/100"

You're very welcome

[Pearl Tshetlo]

i just added a new poem titled a writers confession litrally jst wrote it pls let me kno wat u think

[StoryTellerWriter]

nice rhymes and hanging ending